Grammar

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rosario.eloy0

February 09, 2017 02:13

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I have being practicing my grammar, and I was hoping someone would tell if I did anything incorrect with the following paragraph.

Good evening Ms. Mona Fields,

I am following up on your invitation to interview for a position with Ernst & Young LLP. I can meet with Mr. George Rivera and Ms. Kathleen Carney any time that is convenient for them on Friday February 10th. Please let me know what time works best for their schedule, and I will be there. Please reply with the address where the interview will be held. I look forward to learning more about the employment opportunities with Ernst & Young LLP.

Sincerely,

Eloy G. Rosario

Than you.

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Η Fulton

March 06, 2017 15:45
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Sharhlar bilan harakatlar Doimiy havola
Ms. Mona Fields,

I am following up on your invitation to interview for a position with Ernst & Young LLP. I can meet with Mr. George Rivera and Ms. Kathleen Carney at any time on Friday, February 10th. Let me know what time works best with their schedule so that I may arrive at an appropriate time. Please reply with the address where the interview will be held. I look forward to learning more about the employment opportunities with Ernst & Young LLP.

Sincerely,

Eloy G. Rosario

Thank You.
rosario.eloy0

March 06, 2017 22:39
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Sharhlar bilan harakatlar Doimiy havola
Thank you Ms. Fields.
I can see where you made changes to .my choice of words.
Was the grammar used correctly?
Η Fulton

March 07, 2017 14:50

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Sharhlar bilan harakatlar Doimiy havola
I am not Ms. Fields, but I was trying to help formalize the paragraph.

It is a formal context, so, use the proper language.

Mqola sharhlar uchun yopiq

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